Some things that you made yourself were pretty good, like that awesome mag riot shield. The animation was very smooth, and you could become really good, but it just seemed very awkward at some points. The ending was also the most rushed thing i've ever seen, it just ended.
Keep it up, i'd like to see more from you.
You have potential.
Just 3 things I found bad about this movie.
3. Everything x100,000,000
This was like, 2 Frames per second and the movements were choppy and un-smooth. Compare this to Krinkels's flash, this ws pure lazyness.
This would've taken me atleast 30 minutes to do. Keep practicing.
Look at some of the crap animations on Newgrounds before I review?
This IS a crap animation. Nobody wants to see some badly animated Flash.
Do YOU want to see some crappy Madness Flash? No. So why would we?
You obviously need to improve, but you're just so ignorant that you think that it's okay to submit crap.
First of all, that name, made me want to puke. Change the name. Second of all, choppyness, fix that. And last of all, it was a quick preview with probably nothing from the actual tribute.
This could be WAAAY better.
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